…..taking a dare and a challenge….
I am here
Like all art, I truly believe that poetry is in the eye of the beholder. If you think it’s a poem, then it is. I think that perms should be allowed to be interpreted differently by everyone who reads them.
This is definitely a start in poetry. Keep writing and reading poems to grow as a poet and I hope to see more from you.
Thank you so much for the encouragement!
Poetry is in the eye of the beholder and should be allowed to be interpreted by each reader how he or she connects to it.
This is definitely a foot into poetry, where there are really no rules. Keep reading and writing poems and you will see yourself grow as a poet.
Oh… I am so happy! Thank you!
Yes. I think it is a poem. It tells a story, but leaves me wanting more. I love poems that can be interpreted many ways!
Simple and lovely. Why are you not sure whether it’s a poem? It’s a poem if you say it is. 🙂
The use of repetition provides a useful scaffold for creating poetry. You have used this strategy effectively here. It takes courage to take yourself out of your writing comfort zone. You have characterized yourself as a brave writer. This is what we ask kids to do every day. With this poem, you have walked their walk. Keep exploring your potential!
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